T. R. Girill Society for Technical Communication/Lawrence Livermore Nat. Lab. (retired) [email protected]
Technical Writing: Neurodivergent Technical Talks Help Everyone
Giving a good technical talk--not just for professionals but for student classmates or science fair judges--involves generating the four features needed for every successful technical description:
1. Structure Every description needs an underlying logical framework, but in a talk the listener must follow the speaker's chosen structure, an extra responsibility for the one presenting.
2. Review Careful rereading can really help one absorb technical content, but during a talk the listener must rely on the speaker to provide needed review, a second added duty.
3. Understanding A reader can gradually develop a full understanding of a written technical description, but during a talk that grasp must often come on first hearing. So the speaker has the burden of making that easy.
4. Delivery Readers can decode a written technical description at any pace that suits them, but they must follow the speaker's pace while listening to a talk, so that delivery must be carefully chosen to meet listener needs.
Armando Andres Roca Suarez, in a short note in Science, March 23, 2023 (vol. 379, issue 6638, p. 394, DOI: 10.1126/science.adh3154) extends these presenter responsibilities just a bit further. Suarez has ADHD and sometimes struggles when hearing others present, so when he speaks he now strives to better meet the needs of neurodivergent audience members like himself. Now he follows a few extra, self-imposed rules of thumb to actively address every listener's constraints:
1. Supply motivation. To stimulate listener interest right at the start, Suarez always begins his technical talks with an introduction that overtly 'highlight[s] why the study in important and what gap in knowledge I'm trying to fill.' A good technical talk is NOT a mystery novel with a surprise ending.
2. Offer visual simplicity. Technical complexity on presentation slides often frustrated Suarez, so he supports his own listeners by 'keep[ing slides] simple, using minimal text and inserting graphs, plots, and diagrams to illustrate my points as much as possible.' Visuals that are informative, not just decorative, can usefully minimize complex presentation prose.
3. Practice progressive disclosure. To avoid overwhelming his audience, Suarez 'often start[s] with relatively blank results slides, gradually adding more figures or diagrams in parallel with my explanations.' This is one aspect of the facilitated review obligation mentioned above.
4. Include helpful redundancy. On individual slides that are information dense, Suarez now not only announces his point right away, but sometimes 'repeat[s] that message a second time in a bullet point at the bottom.' Likewise, a 'conclusions slide at the end of each talk [now] reiterates my main points.' Since the presenter sets the pace, this helps listeners who have missed key claims reconnect with the speaker's message.
Following these technical-talk suggestions means more homework for the (student) presenter, of course, usually expressed in extra slide review and practice sessions. But Suarez embraced these extra duties to help his technical audiences, young and old, succeed: 'the techniques [above that] I found useful as an audience member helped and resonated with non-ADHD audience members as well.'
[For more on helping students prepare technical talks, see http://writeprofessionally.org/techlit/talktips-analysis For more on designing effective technical descriptions, see http://writeprofessionally.org/techlit/analysisgd]
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